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I really love the theme of your poem because I can relate to is so well. There are just words that don't exist to express what you want to say ...

This makes me think about spiders. Gosh, I hate spiders. *shudders* anyway, this is a great poem! It's creepy and I like that quality. The way you choose to break ...

I like this poem a lot, even though it is quote sad. This line could be improved in my opinion: Something that they once knew Has vanished as the violence ...

I find this poem very creative and also beautiful. I love the overall concept and the manner in which you end it. At first you start with numerous exclamations and ...

I like how you spaced the poem out, so all the others can deal with it ^^ Even though this is just a simple poem it conveys a lot of ...

I recently borrowed a haiku anthology from the library :) I've come to realize that they can be just as expressive as other types of poetry. I really love some ...

Well, I myself don't find anything at all wrong with this poem (grammatically or otherwise.) I read it aloud and it sounds good. It's well-written and I like the format, ...

This was really violent O.O I like it! (If you click on any of my short stories you'll notice they're all super dark, so yeah...) Anyway, I adore the rhyme ...

I love the Phantom, so I love this poem too :) I bet it would sound great in opera ^^ There are a few grammatical errors, but the reviewers below ...

This is really good and I'm serious. I love spoken word and I bet when you read this aloud it is full of emotion. It's so very sad though, yet ...

My heart is beating so quickly as I read this. You've got a lot of emotion in your words and this is so very well-written :) I hate you so ...

Hello, again. I've come to read the second part of your story thus far. I shall review as I read (as the spiel goes...): The evil was overwhelming, overpowering, a ...

I know you wrote this a longgg time ago, but I saw you had recently posted the second part to this so I figured I'd read up so I knew ...

I haven't read anything else by you yet, but I liked this :) I like medieval stuff a lot. I liked your dialogue, but there were many grammatical mistakes. I'll ...

Beautiful :) Just like your other poem I just reviewed. You use such great imagery once again. This is so amazing: I swear the sky is too obsessed with smog ...