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Wow, this good. I don't even know where to start reviewing. I love each and every line. This is a really deep, simply amazing poem. You have really strong imagery ...

Congratulations on such a moving poem centered around a theme that is current today. (Really hoping this review doesn't sound dumb because I've been awake since early this morning and ...

Hey, EnigmaticSpirit, this was extremely well-written and I enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading the next part of the chapter. I hope you know that you are a ...

I'm guessing the theme of this poem is how women focus on their outward appearances/beauty, but they don't feel appreciated for themselves and their inward beauty. However, the great thing ...

First off, I am really loving this review day because it's like tidying up everything and giving everybody what we all want: attention and reviews! So now, without further ado, ...

Hello :) I liked this poem a lot and I'll make a few suggestions that I think would improve the flow of your poem before I focus on its content: ...

Hello, I'm going to try not to sound repetitive and say what the other reviewers said below, so sorry if I repeat something you've already heard: I like this piece ...

These were pretty decent horror stories, but I challenge you to do better ^^ You have the potential to really grow as a writer. Try to add more detail in ...

I seriously love the theme of this poem. Knife or pen? Choose pen :) You have a pretty good flow in this poem, maybe work on it a bit. Altogether ...

Hello, emjay here to review :) I've just begun to read this story and so far I really like it. It has a good flow to it if you know ...

This is a very good poem! :D Albeit depressing in nature. It has a certain rhythm to it that allows the words to flow as I read them. You break ...

I agree with the other reviewers that there are a lot of distracting spelling errors, but the overall theme of the poem is good :) Let the young man weep, ...

This is me in precalculus every day! This is a poem that most people can relate to and I really like that :) I like the little exclamations scattered throughout ...

Hi, it's review day (and my team is losing -_-) and I'm here to review this story! Well, I don't plan on making any suggestions or anything; I'm just here ...

I like the premise of the story, but as reviewers before me have said, it would be nice if you added more detail :) And poor kid...how did his parents ...