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Really awesome concept for a story! This is excellent and I'm glad you've written more to this. I saw your newest post so I though I'd read the older ones ...

Hi, first off I have a question. What fictional guy are you obsessed with? ^^ Anyway, to business now with the review. This story looks promising and I'm only on ...

Hello zombiekitten, I thought this sounded like an interesting story so I though I'd read it. It's very creepy and I kept reading because I wanted to know what would ...

Hi! First off, I don't know a lot concerning poetry, but I really think this is a good poem :) I also like how it is personal, written for a ...

Really amazing poem! I like the bits of monologue and your word choice is excellent. You capture the narrator's feelings in a realistic way. The audience feels the emotion flowing ...

Okay, wow, I wish I could write poetry like that! I love your choice of language and it was a very deep, thought-provoking poem. Your use of personification is amazing ...

Extremely well written and interesting! Watch your diction, though, because you're a bit too wordy at times for the tone that you are using. The story could be fleshed out ...

Hey again :) I'm back for chapter two. First thing, I really like your description of Molly's ears. Your use of metaphors is strong, which is great, especially since you ...

I love the ending of this poem! :) I also like the rhyme scheme a lot because it gives the work a lighter tone. The way you split the lines ...

Hello, compared to the other two reviewers I have a slightly higher opinion of your writing. Of course, I know very little about poetry ^^ I thoroughly enjoyed your diction ...

Hello :) I am definitely not an expert on the art of poetry, but this, in my opinion, was a great poem. It flows well and I haven't read it ...

Hey there :) I agree with skim's suggestions and believe they would improve your writing piece. I really enjoyed reading the story and your use of present tense and first ...

This is my first review, so I'll try my best :) Excellent story so far. The description is vivid and really drew me in. There are a few grammatical/spelling errors, ...