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Is there a forum for this? 'cause I like this idea ^^ you did I good job.

I meant if you see the light you eventually die. Does that make a little more sense? :) And I can see how you are a bit confused about the ...

Thank you for taking the time to review my piece

That's great haha

Haha yeah that confused me! I was like "yeah, this is great!!" and then..."acorns" ^^

Thank you, as you can see I finally figured it out! :D

(This is just me testing how to do that quote thing haha) I'll read your story later, I swear. Okay, I give up I can't figure out how to do ...

Thank you! :)

I sincerely appreciate your review and I shall definitely take your suggestions into consideration!

Thank @TheMessenger I've been trying to figure that out!

I understand completely. I wrote it for creative writing class and it had a very specific context, so that's why you might not be able to follow a lot of ...

Thank you so much for such an encouraging comment! :)

I really don't want to sound mean haha because it truly does look like a good story :)

I suggest you split this up into several parts because wow, it's long. It looks really interesting, but way too much to read off a computer screen at once! I'd ...

Thank you :D