emjayc

This is a good poem and I like the first line. You use good imagery. It's really sad and I'm sorry this young man decided to take his own life. ...

Great speech :) I wish I could have heard you when you gave it!

I would love to :)

*I myself do not agree. whoops haha

I would kindly like to say that there is a difference between disagreeing with something and hating it. Those are two incredibly difference actions. I myself do not disagree with ...

Thank you!

Hi and thank you for the review! I wrote this poem for an assignment in my creative writing class so that's why there are references that don't make sense unless ...

Thank you! Sorry for the typos. I always write everything by hand before I type it and I guess it was a slip of the finger. I joined this site ...

Really interesting concept writing this poem from satan's crooked view. I like the opening and how he continues to call Christ "love." As a poem it has a pretty consistent ...

I like the ending a lot! Your tone suits the work perfectly and your diction is great because it helps with the childish, ignorant narration. Good story and I hope ...

Well written, you really captured his final moments and put them into vivid words. Your metaphors are a bit cliche though (e.g. You talk about balloons and being the size ...