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Re: I Love You
WOW I LOVE THIS! at first i thought .. oh how immature, an acrostic poem about love.. but i love the vocabulary you used and how the lines were linked ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Young Love
yeah its prose definintely. well sorry, i hate to be mean and critical.. but i really didn't like the way you titled your poem young love.. but then you ripped ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Forgotten
"Am I just being missed? Are people just not noticing me?" i like the questioning to begin the poem, it sets the scene well. "Is there a place that I ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Forever Young
I LOVE THIS its meaningful, but not sort of shove down your throat religious and preacher like. it is sweet, concise, but i definitely like the length of it. no ...
Nov 21, 2008
