emma.b

its so beautifully and romantically but then it turnes dark.. i like it. its empowering your character. well done, and beautiful description. needs a tad more zang though.

it sounds like it could more more complex and grammar oh dear! well done though the next one - - can't wait

wow this is sooo good! ooh i know exactly what you mean. try to use capitals at every line break though and it needs a few gramatical corrections but omg ...

"don't make me build it again?" i totally don't understand this one. whats it metaphorical for? is it metaphorical? i get that its a struggle, but what are you fighting? ...