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emmalh5

  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Release

    This is a very intriguing and touching poem. You have used many effective poetic devices, such a enjambment, and assonance, which is great as sometimes actual rhyming can seem a ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: gay, It's not some mutation.

    This is a brilliant poem, with such a good message behind it. Personally, I feel that you've captured a great load of context within the poem, using historical ideas too, ...

    Nov 24, 2013


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price