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I have to ask... are you a 30 Seconds To Mars fan? This whole poem made me think of their latest album (especially the last stanza.) I really liked this, ...

This was cute! Fun and clever and happy-making. And I can definitely identify with the whole theme of pencils running away from me. :P nice one!

What. The f***. I have to admit, I found it the crazy nonsensical babbling quite funny, until it turned into a graphic stabbing scene. Maybe I'm missing the point about ...

Uhh... Liked it.

Haha! This was cute, and actually quite funny. And sweet. And just the right length. (Today, I'm easily pleased :D Not that this wouldn't please me on another, just... Oh, ...

Can I just say I disagree with almost everyone? This didn't need capitals. It's good how it is. The rhyming of 'lip' and 'dip' does sound forced. Also, I didn't ...

Oh, wow. Wowwowwowwowwowwow... just WOW. I love your style of writing. I loved your original idea. I loved LYLE, I loved Margaret, I loved RAY. I don't think it needs ...

I did this in like ten minutes (the original just wasn't working and I was desperate to replace it) so feel free to tear it to pieces! The girl walked ...

The girl screamed into the gag as the knife shot through the scratchy fabric millimetres from her face. A pair of tanned, muscular hands made their way into the hole ...

I loved the idea. Didn't love much else about it though. :( Stop misusing commas! There was a white bull, so full of hatred and rage, his name was Darkness, ...

This was kinda... Short. That's one word for it. If you're not planning to develop this into a novel or something (that's what I thought it was at first), make ...

Wow. Just... Wow. Amazing idea, by the way. I agree with Snoink, build up lots of suspense THEN bring in the dragon. And add more description. And this annoyed me ...

I read the other version, and I definitely like this one better. It has more description, and a lot more emotion. Hopefully in the rest of the story we'll learn ...

I hate to be a nitpicker, but please fix the spelling and grammar. I found it almost impossible to read. It sounds like you have a good idea, but there's ...

It's writing like this that make me want a dog. I think you got all the emotions down perfectly. Usually I don't like the whole anthropomorphism angle, but this was ...