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emooly

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: MoonMagic..Chap.1

    It was a pretty good story, but you really need to spell check.

    Jun 8, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1 (An idea, not title yet)

    Ok, thanks for the suggestions. Actually Jasper is a girl, it was my friends dog's names, and I couldn't think of anything else. But anyway, yeah, thanks! I'm typing this ...

    Jun 7, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: death like destiny

    I liked this, it was cool. That is pretty much all I have to say, since I can't critique... or whatever. Who cares what I have to say anyway? Heheh ...

    Jun 7, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old and Overripe (Chapter 1)

    Ick. Hmmm... into the trashbin you go dear. Ok. New idea. muahahaha.

    May 25, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poem

    That was nice I'm not very good at critiquing (or however it is spelled spelt... i dunno) You don't get much snow in oregon do you? Mostly rain. I live ...

    May 13, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sunset

    Wow, that was really nice. I always try to write something about nature... but I always end up writing a novelette for teens... lol Your really good for your age. ...

    May 12, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A New Way of Life ( the begining-Part 1)

    Wow, that was really good! I have a nine-year-old sister, and I don't think she could write anything like that. I'll definitely look forward to reading more about Quinn. -Em ...

    May 12, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old and Overripe (Prologue)

    OK, thanks. I wasn't exactly being insistent (now that you've typed that, I know that I got it right on our spelling test today! *random*), the first post I did ...

    May 11, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old and Overripe (Prologue)

    Oh Emily! Your so creative and funny! You make me laugh! Awwwww!

    May 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Haikus

    Wow. I liked them, since the are pretty much the opposite of my haikus. Yes, random stuff there... twinkies, progress reports... *sigh* But I liked them

    May 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Random, bored haikus

    Wow... thank you :) lol

    May 10, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old and Overripe (Prologue)

    Ok... so basically I want you to pick it a part or apart or whatever. I just want to know what people think of it. And even if Ava is ...

    May 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Random, bored haikus

    I don't think anything can be too random...

    May 10, 2007


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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