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I don't think you're ugly, if my opinion counts... Hehehe. He's cute.

Hey my name's in there :) Anyway, this needs some work. "She has finally reached the point. The Boiling point. " The added "Boiling point" destroyed the feel of the ...

I can feel the anger but it's more because I know the situation, not because of the words and flow.

This was really good... hey, I might be slow, but are you Liz_funk? Because you write like her.

For posting their pictures or for being lovely?

pine tree

told

mild

Why is everyone on here so beautiful? You all make me feel bad :(

it's falling, gently drifting down. they call it pure and beauty. what harm can come from seeing elegance? gliding down, silently, but unceasingly, self-advertisting everywhere, in the streets, the ho

"I'd rather die of adoration so hot than your touch so cold." That confused me. I don't know why.

I'm trying to critique this but I can't find any part that's worth changing (to me anyway). But it's not about me, so all I can say is I really ...

Hmm.. ripped... sounds painful...

They were a bit crude... then again, I can't draw a straight line without a ruler.

The descriptions were rather short. You would start off with what seems like a good descriptions but you wouldn't go on with it. Your last sentence doesn't conclude the whole ...