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i like the story in this poem clear journey from a dreamer .... ……And so they said to this little boy of eight, If he went on dreaming doom would ...

thats actually really helped me man ... im not much of a writter yet but thats given me alot to think about cheers .... what do you think of this ...

this is my first attempt at poetry on here so i have just created a random draft for a poem... make of it what you feel . i can guess ...

hay their ... en.lite.d.art.here like the poem ... brilliant flow and most importantly you constantly relate back to the context of what this poem stands for without straying off course ...

this is just a draft guy's would really apriciate any feedback and critisim :D

Cast Stranger - Dealer Play notes This play is set on a dark night at a late particular hour on an empty street There is a dustbin which is tipped ...

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brilliant subject .... can relate to this myself ... but where does it lead .... ? maybe a moment of realisation would further benifit the fact that you can see ...

brilliant subject .... can relate to this myself ... but where is does it lead .... ? maybe a momnt of realisation would further benifit the fact that you can ...