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Re: All That It Took
i like the story in this poem clear journey from a dreamer .... ……And so they said to this little boy of eight, If he went on dreaming doom would ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Unseen
hay their ... en.lite.d.art.here like the poem ... brilliant flow and most importantly you constantly relate back to the context of what this poem stands for without straying off course ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: i can see it now..
brilliant subject .... can relate to this myself ... but where is does it lead .... ? maybe a momnt of realisation would further benifit the fact that you can ...
Jul 16, 2009
