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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Foxglove

    This is a great start to your story! I really like the metaphors in the beginning: it got me hooked right away. However, you might want to add more detail ...

    Sep 26, 2014


To have more, you have to become more. Don't wish it was easier - wish you were better. For things to change, you have to change, and for things to get better, you have to get better.
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