esteria

Blinded by anguish and despair I could not see all around me the rays of hope. Blinded by desperation and defeat I could not see the rising sun and with ...

They say It gets darker before dawn, well I say this darkness has gone on too long. I also heard them say, without winter, spring would not be so pleasant ...

I tried to put a few changes in the second and third verses so please read and tell me what you think thank you for the reviews and feel free ...

thank you guys for the criticism will do some work on it.

I tried to make something of it but couldn't make head or tails of what you were talking about. It might have a meaning but couldn't get it. It seems ...

I kick stones as I walk, I choke when I talk, If it didn't hurt ,would punch the wall. I yell out obscenities, I tell you, 'am full of angst, ...

you wrote like a pro and not the amateur you say you are. This is a great poem. there are parts that i liked most like the one below , ...

from your question about ever feeling lost, well i have felt really lost at some point in my life and this poem it does remind me of how i felt ...

it is a good poem until i reached the last stanza and you lost me. I mean if your heart had jumped from your chest to his why would you ...

short and precise, i liked it . it makes one think doesnt really need changes favorite part was 'No one answered through the still of the night For the world ...

One of the best poems I've read so far. Great flow, quite articulate and carried some emotion. The only error I guess is the spelling of hymn of which you ...

I opened my heart to thee And now I wish I hadn’t I opened my heart to thee And now I feel like I was Just your habit what if ...

sweet, sweet, sweet...thats all i can say 'Bubbly and trusting, as most five year olds are. If you need me, I'll come, no matter how far.' couldnt ask for a ...

Fear of the unknown, lack of courage to face life's challenges; fear of people's views and opinions, we look at life through a peep hole, and give up before we ...

Love and Bubblegum Love is like choosing bubblegum while wearing a blindfold. Some will be sour, and some will be sweet. He might betray you or he might enchant you. ...