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  • Art & Photography Re: photography!

    They are all really nice, and professional looking, which isn't something I say often. I also like how there is feeling and yet it looks beautiful at the same time. ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: New Photos by May

    Number 5 was great. I felt it was prettier and different than most flower shots.

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Fairy Dust

    I don't mean to just cut out a category, but I really am tired of the photos that give that myspace, 'scene' angle-shot feel. It just seems old to me. ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Bella's Block

    Actually, I disagree with previous users about cropping the pic. to get rid of the side things. I think that's what makes the picture, in fact, I'd like to see ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Black and White

    Nice shots ; ) First off, I think you did a nice job, but I think you can find better subjects. Some off them, especially number 1, seemed like those ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Pictures of Victoria

    Number 1 and 2 had very nice backgrounds, and I think that's where the remainder of the photographs really suffered. The subject of a picture is very important, of course, ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: If Only (Updated!)

    Okay, I think you have a little bit of a tendency to want to tell the story rather than write it. What I mean by that is, you don't have ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Waiting to Exhale

    Nice poem, I would suggest, however, to review your lines and break them more. They're a little too lengthy and don't flow properly.

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Scrapbook

    I think it's a cute poem and has a decent subject, however I agree with the previous users that your rhythm is off, especially at the line "and stop saying ...

    Apr 5, 2008


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy