eviehoward

I was going to put at the end "and together we'll beat Gary Motherfu****g Oak". But couldn't find a good line to rhyme with it xD

I'm so glad someone liked it :D

Those 2 lines are just saying that we remember who we wanted to become when we were children. It floods us with dreams we never achieved. Kind of like a ...

I think make it more obvious that it is texting. If you're quoting texts or remembering them then that sort of lingo is acceptable :)

Thank you very much :D

Lucifer is much nicer than God :D

I'd be a hell server personally.

One day I will get around to it. I'm reading American Gods at the moment which is very intriguing.

No problem :D I just want to make sure everyone's work is the best it can be ^^

I was constructive. I simply said you needed to go back and edit your work. Pretty much everyone else here has said the same as me. I am only here ...

Well it's all available on this site. Just take a look.

I need to read Paradise Lost, I was supposed to study it but dropped out before we did >.< I actually came up with the idea of this poem are ...

I tried that at the beginning D: Still didn't work, well I improvised, the stanza separations are definitely noticed :)

Still can't put in stanzas D: Will have to improvise

It was in stanzas. This silly site removed them o: