eviehoward

Is there a problem with what I said?

What people don't realise is that when I wrote this it was meant to show that God is actually Lucifer. Lucifer tricked God into Hell then left him there. :) ...

And technically it is a story :)

Thanks for the advice :) The point of the short story is the mystery. It's the vague-ness which makes it all the more interesting. I don't think I will ever ...

Thanks for the critique :) I really struggled with the Playthings lines haha, but in the end thought I would just make God repeat the lines, as If he is ...

I am not particularly religious, and don't follow Christianity. I'm actually Pagan, but I love making controversial poems. Thanks for the critique. I actually read this aloud at a poetry ...

The whole point of the poem is the repetitiveness of it. It symbolises a soul which lives then dies everyday :) A constant circle of hope then loss. Sorry if ...

I made a few changes :) Corrected the were/weren't issue, cut out a few colons (i have an addiction to them, and corrected the capitalisation :) Thanks for the heads ...

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Thanks for the review. This chapter isn't about dialogue. I think dialogue is very overrated personally. The next chapter will exand on Alice as a person, but this was a ...

Was able to put them in but had to improvise a little :) Hope that makes it flow a little easier.

Damn editor didn't put in my stanza breaks >.< But thanks for the compliment :) I'm off to edit it and try and put the stanzas in.

Thank you very much :)

Thanks :D

Thank you very much :D