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I like this a lot! I think that you should add more though. At some points in this, it was a bit too simple. Maybe add more detail, that would ...

I like this a lot! It's different than most of the stuff on this site. Most of the stuff on here is just poetry about pretty girls falling in love ...

Lost and Found :) Very very very good piece of writing. I love the beginning part. Keep writing, I love this!!

It's amazing how something so short can bring up so many memories. I think that this piece is very very good. You should continue writing from this piece and make ...

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Amazing. When I visualize this in my head, I'm disturbed, and you did a really good job with this. Please tell me you don't actually do this to yourself, because ...

Okay, This better not turn out to be a teenage-highschool-cyber-bullying-thing. And if it is, make it different. Make it different than most teenage-highschool-drama-books. PLEASE!! *Btw, i accidental

YES!! I LIKE THIS A LOT. It has great flow and rythym (good for any poem!) You should submit this to a writer's magazine or somthing, I'm pretty sure it ...

I just read through the comments and thought, "Great. Now everyone's going to think I'm the bad guy...Oh well!" I thought this because, well, I actually don't enjoy this poem ...