eyeofthestorm

Hey, this is Rylee for a review. :) This is a really cute story, but there were a couple things that needed changing. On the bright side, though, it's mostly ...

Hey birds :) I just want to start by saying I have a particular dislike of rhyme in my own poetry. I've found that it often compromises the emotion of ...

Hey! First of, apologies for typos or autocorrect. (touchscreens, hehe) I always always always pick on the rhyme schemes. I do not like them, even when executed perfectly, and when ...

hey! First of all, I'm typing this on a kindle and I'm not quite used to the touch screen so forgive typos and weird autocorrect. I want to begin my ...

Hey! I think you meant this to be spaced, but sometimes the formatting is just a little...odd. I'm going to space this out in this review and edit it like ...

Hello. I just wanted to say I've read a lot of your poetry and I really admire your style. The way you phrase things is so beautiful and unique. Everything ...

Hey, I'm Rylee to review your poem (: I wen through and read a few of the other poems you've posted, and I must say this isn't quite as good ...

Hey (: I'm Rylee to review you poem n_n So, the way you formatted it was pretty interesting. I'm not going to say I've never seen it before but I ...

Hello n_n I like your poem a lot, it has very clear and precise imagery and I like that, the way I can almost feel the speakers pain in the ...

Hello! I like your poem. The title caught my eyes, and, though it wasn't exactly what I was expecting, it didn't fail to be a flash of entertainment. I don't ...

I love this! Here and there I have a few little grammar nitpicks, but nothing major. Here's an edited version. Three months ago, a small group of Dutch scientists did ...

Hey, this reminds me of one of my old friends... :/ *peers at the computer screen* You aren't.... STALKING ME, are you??? Just kidding. On to the review. I really ...

Hey Nina. This is Storm to review your story. First off, this reminded em of Sweeney Todd. (I haven't see nthe movie, just the play. I love it, it's not ...

Hello! I really liked your piece, I found it conveyed a lot in a little bit of time. However, it needs a fair bit of cleaning up. I think if ...

Hey sockmonkey! I've read a few of your works. I could see them being poetry, but they aren't really set up in any definite way. I could see it starting ...