fading-dream

"Merchants and artisans made their homes near West Gate, near the Road, where the most of the traffic came through." It makes more sense if you remove the "the" before ...

“I know, but I want to hear in again. Your story with grandfather is very interesting and adventurous,” Moira said as she lean against her." I didn't really like this ...

This does sound like it would be very interesting. Hope you actually write it, though I do have one question. What if a baby were to accidentally get one of ...