fading-dream

The Banquette - 2nd Version I walked gracefully down the beautiful hallway. My steps echoed loudly on the marble floor. The walls were made of what appeared to be pure ...

Thanks for the comments. I like my other works better but still felt that I needed to post this. I might go back and change some stuff because after two ...

I wrote this story in hopes of getting back into writing. It has been about two months since I have written anything. This story is a "last day" story that ...

Wow! This received way better reviews than I thought it would. Thank you guys for being so supportive. I can't believe it's been so long since I've written anything new. ...

Genocide

Granted, but they are so sharp they get stuck in the ice. I wish my friends had called me to go bowling...

Thanks for all the comments people. I really am not too proud of this piece of work to be honest. I think I have written better. My writing style has ...

Okay, so here is my review. The piece is pretty good. I liked the way you told about her emotions. One thing that annoys me is that so many sentences ...

Applause, applause, applause and more applause. This was nearly perfect. From the very first until the very last, I was compelled to read. I love how you never actually gave ...

Etch

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

sand

Granted, but you lose your wish. I wish I would turn into a frog...

The gentleman gave his name as "Mr. Gray." I admitted him and hustled him into my office. "Just sit here, Mr. Gray." This is worded awkwardly. Maybe break it into ...

This is the first I'm reading of these. It was alright, but could definitely be done better. I took the liberty of reading how the first one started and it ...