fading-dream

Okay, correct me if I'm wrong. They killed Jimmy and now his ghost is helping hide the body. If that's not it, you had better explain. Also, I expect you're ...

I really liked this. I definitely wanted to read more (even though I read chapter 1 first :D ) I do have one thing to say. I completely disagree with ...

“Yes, I am.” The old man stood up straighter. “Cedric, its time for you to marry.” “A year? He’s giving you one year to find a bride?” In these two ...

"Merchants and artisans made their homes near West Gate, near the Road, where the most of the traffic came through." It makes more sense if you remove the "the" before ...

“I know, but I want to hear in again. Your story with grandfather is very interesting and adventurous,” Moira said as she lean against her." I didn't really like this ...