fading-dream

Wow! This received way better reviews than I thought it would. Thank you guys for being so supportive. I can't believe it's been so long since I've written anything new. ...

Thanks for all the comments people. I really am not too proud of this piece of work to be honest. I think I have written better. My writing style has ...

Applause, applause, applause and more applause. This was nearly perfect. From the very first until the very last, I was compelled to read. I love how you never actually gave ...

Thanks for all of the suggestions and replies I've gotten. I honestly didn't expect this kind of reaction. I didn't expect people to like it this much. I'll be sure ...

Personally, I really liked it. Everything was good that I can see. I too was hoping for someone completely different from Leo. She didn't seem like she would be a ...

Okay, I have updated and made changes as I saw fit. Expect to see chapter 2 soon.

Thanks for the review. I'll be sure to change those things you mentioned for the update. Looking back at it, I agree with every suggestion you made. My main problem ...

Okay, I'm not saying my idea is the greatest but it might work to mix things up. Maybe, the grandmother wants to tell the story but everyone is sick of ...