fairy_at_heart

I really enjoyed the "Uglies" series. It is by Scott Westerfield. He does a really good job at expressing light romance and lots of action. He was able to mix ...

Ok, i have 2 things to say to you. First your poem is really depressing. why would you want to write about trying to kill yourself. Also, i dont think ...

OK, just a few things to criticise. First of all... The sun beds down beneath I don't exactly understand what you are trying to say here. what do you mean ...

The "its complicated" rising from the crash. Ok, i didnt really understand this part. What do you mean by "The "its complicated""? If you find another way to get your ...

What does it matter If the day’s long gone What does it matter If the night’s so forlorn I think that you should try to find a word that rhyms ...

I thought it was fairly good. But the puncuation kind of distracted me. A poem full of questions is never a great idea. It is ok to have a question ...

Oh boy. This is a hard one! I have read ALOT of atrocious books in my life. But out of the ones i remember most, "Across Five Aprils" would have ...

To tell you the truth, I really enjoyed this. I myself am a very picky reader and often criticize peoples poems. The only thing I have to say to you ...