faithless0408

Hey! I really like this work, it is easy to get lost in and your storytelling is excellent. The only small thing is that it is sometimes a little hard ...

Great work! The only small changes I would make is to change the first line to "I never brought up the topic of my father" as it sounds a little ...

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this poem and I thought I'd let you know just how much I liked it and why! I like the simplicity of this. I like ...

Hi! I feel strangely nervous to review this because it's so fantastic that all I will be able to say is just how fantastic it is...and I'm not sure that's ...

Hi Tigerlilly! I am really impressed by this piece and I can definitely see how your english teacher couldn't put it down! It's beautifully done. The situations and emotions you're ...

Hi! As a cat owner/lover/hater myself, I felt I really understood where you were coming from with this poem. Oh the joys of having a cat... There are times when ...

Hi! For a rough draft, this is very good. I like the chemistry between the two characters though I'm not sure if there are romantic feelings there...or indeed if they ...

Hi! Firstly, this is really brilliant writing, top notch stuff! I know what it's like to go through a horrible break up so I felt like I could really relate ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this. You have a natural talent for storytelling as what you have written flows really nicely and I don't feel lost or confused at any point ...

Hey! Wow. I don't usually review poetry because I think it is often extremely personal and I'm never sure if I've interpreted it correctly. However, your poem really impressed me ...

Hey! I'm always one for triplets, though I am usually more interested in those who are identical, just because they are so rare! But anyway, I like your idea better ...

Hey! I don't review everything I read. I know that's bad and that I should but I love reading and I often just don't have the time to do both. ...

Hey! I liked this. I'm intrigued to now where it's going, so that's got to be a positive, right? Unfortunately, I can't shake the feeling that this Damon bloke is ...

Hello, I am Faithless and I am here to review! Firstly, well done, I really like this poem and I'm not usually all that interested in poetry, so be proud ...

Hey. I really liked this poem. I never used to be one for depressing pieces of writing, and in some ways I'm still not, but I actually enjoyed reading this ...