fallenangel

Wow. Thanks so much for all the reviews! For those of you who think it's cliche--or cheesy (put me on a cracker cheesy, thanks ; )) thanks for your opinions ...

Hey everyone! Thank you very much for the suggestions. Sorry about the messy grammar mistakes! It was quick typing and I procrastinate editing obsessively. Peace. -fallenangel

Jaderednalih (Or anyone else that wants to read this), Hi. Thank you for reading my story : ) I'm glad that you were able to relate to it. I'm sorry ...

Wow thanks so much for the reviews! Sorry about the screw up with the point of views... I tend to get into what I'm writing and forget it's supposed to ...

I guess it's all a matter of opinion. Some readers might grasp that particular point (or hook?) of view better than others... I thought it might be fun to picture ...

Ha ha thanks guys. I appreciate the advice and editing options. This has kind of been a first for me on poetry, so obviously I've got a few things to ...

That's a cute poem! I really enjoyed it. The style reminded me immediately of Shel Silverstein's works. It was very entertaining and the imagery was fun. Perhaps you could fix ...

This is so cute! Oh my heck I love it. I could really see what was going on in the story, it has great potential. Please keep writing! Great job.

Thanks for the advice, obviously it needs some work! I know that it was confusing, and I apologize but once again; this was simply an exert. I left out a ...

I like the ideas you've got going here, you've definitely got a start. I would suggest organizing it a little bit, it's kind of hard to understand exactly what's going ...