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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Fire and Ice

    Wow! Very enchanting! I think your poem does more than just scratch the surface of romance- it gives an in depth look. I also liked how, in a way, your ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hidden Veins

    Awesome work!! I liked the Skakespearean English, it really added to the overall effect of this poem. I do agree, though- I would switch one of the thou's in the ...

    Mar 8, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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