fantasydragon01

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D Oh, my goodness! I loved it so, so, so much. I laughed. This is really hilarious. I am a ...

Wow, amazing job. 8 words are telling the truth. The cold, hard truth. Society is pretty judgemental. They give an example of what NOT to do when judging others. First ...

Lol!!! I loved this piece very much!!! You did a good job writing it all down, and everything seems to make perfect sense. :D What a humorous piece! lol Is ...

Hello. Let me start with the nitpicks before I start praising your work. Save the best for last! "It muttered something under its breathing..." "You...w-..."It muttered. You used the word ...

"Needles of cold". Hmm. I suggest that you write "cold needles". "...were an ancient peoples..." Perhaps you should write "people". "...for countless conflicts, always refusing...." You should delete

Hello!! This is a good fantasy story. I like how it has elves in it. It is a very well-written story. I don't know what else to say. I like ...

Hello. I came upon this because of the title. I really like how you mention these types of emotions. I think that is very creative. The rhyming was very good, ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS. You will really like this website. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I'd be more than happy to answer. I really like ...

Hi! I just came across this and decided to review it. The story was well-written, and i see no grammatical mistakes, except for the end, where you said "to" instead ...

Hi. I really liked your story here. I enjoyed the fact that it was about a father/daughter moment. I think they are very sweet and there is something about it ...

Hello. I really, really liked what you wrote, mainly because it was so well-written and so, so true. I loved the way you wrote about how everyone has wings. Your ...

Happy Review Day! I liked your poem very much. I liked the way you wrote about tears and how you did "Oceans of summer teardrops", etc.. It's very poetic and ...

Hello. Happy Review Day. I really like your poem because of the message it portrays. I myself love helping people because there are people in this world who needs help. ...