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help i've fallen and i can't get up

  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    thanks so much for reading this and reviewing it

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    ahh thanks so much for your review ellie, sorry to make you cry LOL

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    Thank you for taking the time to write this review, I really appreciate it. I am really glad you liked the piece. It makes me really happy when people read ...

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 12 days of poetry (2023 edition)

    review part 2 hehe: "undeserved hope, undeserved glares" this one is tricky for me to interpret also. "all those times you held a blind eye // i wondered if i ...

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 12 days of poetry (2023 edition)

    LOL love that i said 'quick review' as if i wasn't about to get carried away

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: our favorite colors

    hey there, thanks for taking the time to read this and leave this review : )

    Apr 30, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: our favorite colors

    hey kate, thanks for taking the time to read my piece and write this review : ).

    Apr 30, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: denial through the lens of grief

    hey, thanks so much for taking the time to leave this review. I'm glad you felt like I captured grief accurately. I'm also glad you liked those last two sentences, ...

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: denial through the lens of grief

    hey, thank you. i'm glad that my story moved you to treasure the time you have with your loved ones

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: denial through the lens of grief

    hey thanks so much for taking the time to leave this review. I really appreciate it

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i visited our childhood home (you weren't in it)

    this makes me sick I love it

    Apr 10, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chess, rooks, and finger tattoos

    hey tambo, thanks for the review. I loved that you noticed the connection between those two sentences. I'm glad you could get a sense of the emotion of the piece.

    Apr 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chess, rooks, and finger tattoos

    hey there, thanks so much for taking the time to read this and write a review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my piece. i do try to subvert expectations in ...

    Apr 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chess, rooks, and finger tattoos

    hey there, thanks for the review. i'm glad you loved the way the story progressed and how I paced it. i appreciate you!

    Apr 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: there's something wrong with me

    i'm glad i make u feel seen ;-; u make me feel seen too. this is the most unhinged thing i've posted here LOL

    Apr 1, 2024


Chickens are honestly little dinosaurs. And they know it.
— ChieRynn