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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: .

    Hi HolographicLadybug, Felistia here with another review on your novel. :D Sorry about being a bit late for the review, but better late then never. :D Story: Right so this ...

    Jan 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: New Haven: Chapter 7: Possibilities

    Hi MadWriter7, Felistia here with a review on your latest chapter. :D Story: The story is developing well and is actually starting reminding me a bit of the Naughtiest Girl. ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: To Turn a Spark Into a Forest Fire

    Hi bluewaterlily, Felistia here with a review on your poem. :D This is a really beautiful poem and has so much emotion packed into every stanza. It almost had me ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Set Me Free Too

    Hi Rishik, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly, welcome to YWS. I hope you have fun on the site. Now on with the review. Wow you certainly ...

    Jan 1, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: The South African Waterfront

    Hi jessiebear, Felistia here with a review on your piece of writing. :D First off I really like the concept that you choose to write about. You give a probably ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: HolographicLadybug's Class on Seriousism

    Hi HolographicLadybug, Felistia here with a review for you. :D Right so lets dive right in shall we? First off, WOW that it a confusing poem of note, but absolutely ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Phenomenology

    Hi Atsmai, Felistia here with a review on your poem. :D Right lets jump right in, shall we? I really like the subject you choose to write about and you ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Let Me Guide You

    Hi SUNBEAR, Felistia here with a review on your short story. :D Story: So the story is a little slow at first and feels like it is going to be ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Whispers in the Water- Chapter 2

    Hi ChocolateCello, Felistia here with another review for you. :D (No rhyme intended) Story: Okay so you have added a whole lot more elements to the story and have left ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Whispers in the Water- Chapter 1

    Hi ChocolateCello, Felistia here with a review on your chapter. :D Story: Excellent job on the story telling so far. This was so fast paced and yet it included a ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: .

    Hi HolographicLadybug, Felistia here with another review on your novel. :D Story: So the story is getting way more interesting as we have met a previous character's brother who seems ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: .

    Hi HolographicLadybug, Felistia here with another review on your story. :D Story: Okay so I am presuming that we have collected the right amount of characters and the story is ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Giving Curse Chapter 4

    Hi Magestorrow, Felistia here for another review on your chapter. :D Story: The story is progressing nicely and I love that you gave some backstory of Nix. It will help ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Giving Curse Chapter 3

    Hi Magestorrow, Felistia here with a review on your chapter. :D Story: So the story is coming along nicely. I like that you are taking some time for the reader ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sleep

    Hi matthewmazer, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. So this is going to be a rather short review since as CHRISSY321 said there really isn't anything wrong ...

    Dec 29, 2015


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