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Re: In the Absence of Stars - 1.1
Hi Jericho, Felistia here with a short review on your story. Story: I am a little confused on what the main plot is. You launched us right into action which ...
Nov 25, 2015 -
Re: Adrift on Blue
Hi cpedro, Felistia here with a review on your poem. I really like the theme you have here. I love the ocean and tales about ships, if that is what ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire: Chapter 1
Hi Magestorrow, Felistia here with a review on your story. I just have to say that this reminds me of a game I play called Monster Hunter. It has long ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Slave Girl
Hi acm, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. I really like how you put a lot of emotion into this poem. I love the way you describe ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Guilt
Hi Sigyn, Felistia here again with a review on your poem. Firstly congratulations on the new star. Now on with the review. I really liked your use of words in ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Black Shadow
Hi NicolMemo, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. Firstly I would like to say that that is an excellent title, perfect for drawing readers in. Now on ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: (Wish For) Pernicious Wings
Hi penfeme, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. Firstly welcome the YWS, I hope you have fun and enjoy it here. Now on with the review. I ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Charybdis
Hi Artemis28, Felistia here again with a short review on your poem. I love the poem even though it is a bit short. I think you could make it a ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Forever Burning
Hi MissLyricz, Felistia here with a short review on your great poem. I must say that I love this poem, the lyrics, the description, every thing about it is interesting. ...
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: Flower Petals
Hi Sigyn, Felistia back for another review, this time on your poem. Firstly I love the theme and the twist on the old (he loves me, he loves me not ...
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: To Infinity and Beyond
Hi Sigyn, Felistia here with a short review on your story. Firstly welcome to YWS and congratulations on your first work. I really liked this short story. The description pretty ...
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: The Giving Curse Chapter 1
Hi Magestorrow, Felistia here with a short review on you story. Firstly I must say that I love the concept and the story plot you are going for here. This ...
Nov 21, 2015 -
Re: Polyphemus
Hi Artemis28, Felistia here with a short review on you poem. Firstly I love how you wrote a poem about a Greek story. I love the Greeks and all their ...
Nov 21, 2015 -
Re: I Can't Write Poetry
Hi DragonWriter, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. Firstly love the rhymes, have I mentioned I am a sucker for those. I really like the concept you ...
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: Seed of tears
Hi SunnyD, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. Firstly welcome to YWS, I hope you like it here. I love the rhyming scheme you used and how ...
Nov 20, 2015