felistia

Hi Felistia here with a short review. I love your work, it is so descriptive. This one is all over the place story wise, but wow it is beautiful. So ...

Hi Felistia here with a review. This story is amazing and so interesting. The description in here is perfect and the dialogue is wonderful. I do have some problems with ...

Hi Felistia hear with a short review. Holy cow this is funny. It had me snickering and giggling so much that people started to look at me weird while I ...

Hi Felistia here with a short review. I must just say that this is a very inspirational poem. I like the way you used the fly as a main character, ...

Hi Felistia here with a short review. What a touching poem, it had me almost tearing up. Note: I don't tear up very often for anything, so well done on ...

Hi Felistia here with a short review. Ha ha. This is really funny, but I don't do any of this stuff other than perhaps number 4. I rewrote Talons of ...

Hi Felistia here with a short review. Ha ha. That was clever and funny, a bit like what I meant to do with my I Hate Math one, but much ...

Hi Felistia here with a short review. This is a very haunting poem riding on an interesting story. It works very well and the descriptions are good, but the best ...

Hi Felistia here with a short review. Ooooo this gave me the shivers. Excellent writing. You have perfect balance for description and dialogue and both are superb. The story took ...

Hi Felistia here with a short review. You read, "To be continued?" Ha ha, just a joke I this is a very well described piece. There is some emotion in ...

Hi Felistia here with a short review. Now that was a good poem. It was very interesting and emotional. I like the picture you painted and it stayed consistent the ...

Hi Felistia here with a review. Wow. This is very skilled writing. I am almost lost for words, but not quite. In the beginning all sorts of thoughts were running ...

Hi Felistia here with a review. Ok first things first please don't take offense to anything I say. I am trying to help and that's all, so if you don't ...

Hi Felistia here with a review. Wow, what an interesting poem. I have so many questions about it, does the girl really have six eyes and if so why? Why ...

hi Felistia here with a review. This writing is so captivating and draws you in after the first paragraph. I like the descriptions you used for the characters, it is ...