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Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “I’m only doing my job.” I hear a knock at the door and Jenna gets it. ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Grammar and Punctuation saw my mothers face, should be saw my mother's face, Overall thoughts Story plot: ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Chapter plot: Okay so below you said that this wasn't the whole chapter, yes? So ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Sometime around 2:28, Okay so while I really liked your rhyme scheme, I thought that this ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Okay so this chapter had multiple problems with it. The grammar and punctuation was terrible and the ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The candle by the window flickered as Luna swept past. Mother loved candles; dotted around the ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks "You know, Gregor, I was trapped in the Underland by the rats for some two years ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this review wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Done!” James shouts as the first flakes of snow begin to fall. He grabs up ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful review day. :D Nit-picks I ate nothing for breakfast and I’m going to regret that later today. Okay so ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful review day. :D I'd just like to note that I haven't read the series that you are basing this ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Okay so since this is two separate chapters, I'm going to review them separately. So on with ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I ride the wind to a safe distance. I am unable to save the many dying ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks He looked menacing. Okay so here comes a saying that you're going to hear many times ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Okay so my first piece of advice is to format the poem with stanzas and spaces, ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Grammar and Punctuation like why the great mtawala made it this way, "mtawala" should be capitalized since ...