felistia

Thank you again. You're going to love the next chapter. So exciting. Also this was why the Wisp Talons avoid the beach from your question before. :D

Thank you for the review. Glad your enjoying it. Yes. The next book will basically be Felistia's book. You're going to love it. :D

Thank you again for another review. I'm glad the plot is exciting you. I must confess that this is probably the 10th draft of this story. It's been in the ...

Thank you again for another review. Again good points that I'll have to look at once editing comes around. As for the map bit, I replace puzzle with map since ...

Thank you for another review. You have a good point regarding the wounds. I'll have to include more about that when I get to editing.

Thank you again for another review. When it comes to editing I'll probably add in more thoughts about being around hostile dragon species. I'll need to tweak it a bit ...

Thank you again. Now that you've got into the story somewhat, you're coming up with a lot of good points as far as inconsistency goes. It's going to be so ...

Thanks again for your review. I think you're going to like the next few chapters.

Thank you for another review. Again a lot of good points that I'll have to look over again when I edit this chapter. :D

Thank you for another review and your thoughts. You have a lot of good points in this chapter. When I go back to edit I'll be sure to make it ...

Thank you again. When come back to edit I want to add in more about the Shadow Talons past. I feel like I have a bit in here, but not ...

Thank you again. Felistia does have quite a bit to tell. I'll definitely be exploring that later. :D

Thank you again for another review. This is one of those chapters that could have been added onto the end of another chapter.

Thank you again. You're never to harsh. I like to hear your thoughts on the story and if something doesn't make sense I need to change. Don't shy away for ...

Thank you again. I'm glad you like the plot so far. As for the 'plot hole' there's a reason you don't see Wisp Talons near the beach. You'll learn that ...