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Thanks for the review. I did mention in the second chapter that Hisster needed Zoltar for his geography skills, but for your second question I completely agree. I'll go back ...

Thanks for the review. As for the two plot holes these will get explained much later on. As for Hisster's character personality, I see what you're getting at, but I ...

Thanks for the review. :D

Thanks for all your reviews so far. I find them very helpful and will go back and apply everything you've said. Thanks again. :D

Thank you so much for all your reviews so far. They are very helpful and will make my story much better. I hope you are enjoying the story too. :D

First thing: No. I wrote it today. Second thing: That was just my opinion. It's your story, so you decide. Third thing: Sorry about that my mistake. Fourth thing: Sorry ...

First thing: No. I wrote it today. Second thing: That was just my opinion. It's your story, so you decide. Third thing: Sorry about that my mistake. Fourth thing: Sorry ...

First thing: No. I wrote it today. Second thing: That was just my opinion. It's your story, so you decide. Third thing: Sorry about that my mistake. Fourth thing: Sorry ...

Thanks for the review. I've fixed the problems. :D

It's okay. I really appreciate your reviews. It was just a quick tip. :D

It's okay. I really appreciate your reviews. It was just a quick tip. :D

Thanks for all your reviews. After review I'll go back and fix them. I have just one little favor to ask. Could you also say at the end of your ...

Thanks for the review. I'll go and make the make the changes right away. :D

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