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P.s for your last question about the shadow talons, I explain that in the next chapter. :D

P.s for your last question about the shadow talons, I explain that in the next chapter. :D

Thanks for the review. I'll go back and apply the changes right away. :D

P.s I made the map. :D

Thank you so much for the review. I'll go right away and apply what you've said to the chapter. Thanks again. :D

Thanks for the review. :D

Thanks for the review. I'll go back and tweak some of the sentences. :D

Thanks for the review. :D I'm glad you liked it. :D

Thanks for the review. I'll see what I can do to make this better. This isn't my best short story though. The best be far is what happened to the ...

Thanks for the review. I'll look into fixing the tavern bit. I was meaning for it to be a pub. :D

Thanks for the review. I will go over and tweak some of the lines. :D

thanks. :D

Thanks. I feel good and I hope you do too. :D

Thanks for the review. I've had this idea for the last ten yeas and I finally got it out on paper, so it's get to hear that you liked it. ...

Thanks for the review. I've gone back and edited the mistakes. :D