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Okay I will just rewrite the story and fix the mistakes. I think that will be easier for both of us. Near an old, rickety fence stood a little girl ...

Thank you Artemis28. I will fix it right away.

Oh okay.

Sorry for taking so long to reply. Thank you for the review and I have fix the problems.

Thank you very much for the review. I will fix the problems right away.

All fixed.

I do that for all my work. It really helps you get into the right mood.

Thank you for the review. I will fix it as soon as I have finished reading your latest work.

Thank you for the review. I don't really agree with your advice, sorry. If I added the things you suggested the piece wouldn't flow as well. Piece of advice, when ...

Thank you for the review. I will fix it up when I get the chance.

Thank you for the review. I will polish it up a bit. I have added a rhyming scheme though. Claws, paws, roars, they all rhyme.

Thank your for the review. I will fix everything when I get the chance. I agree that Zoltar should back down sometimes.

Thank you for the review. I will fix everything when I get the chance. I keep the chapter relatively short so that it is easier for people to review.

Thank you for the review. I will fix it when I get the chance and I will slow down on the action from now on.

Nice poem. I like the rhymes.