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Thank you for the review. I will fix the problems immediately. Don't worry the story will get a lot more interesting as we go along. I didn't what to shove ...

Thank you for the comment.

Thank you for the review. I will change it when I get a chance.

I do read a lot of the wings of fire books, so I might have picked up the style, but I have no intention of ripping it of. The story ...

Thank you for the review. I will get round to fixing the problems in a little while.

Thank you for the review, the advise will prove helpful to me. I will work on the poem when I have the chance.

Thank you for the review. This was the first poem I wrote and if you look at my other poems, you will see that I am trying out new rhyming ...

thank you for the review and don't be afraid to give me some nit-picks. I like it when people tell me what will make my writing better or just point ...

Thank you for the review.

Thank you for the review. I will get round to fixing it when I get the chance.

Hi Tigerlilly37, Felistia here. I love the metaphor you used for the poem. I love cats and the way you wrote the poem reminds me of one. Well done.

Thank you for the review. I am a bit busy at the moment, so I will apply the changes when I get time. Thank you again for following my story.

I would love if you could review my poem on autumn. Here is the link.

Hi LeftyWriter, Felistia here with a short review. I love autumn, even though where I come from the trees stay green and it never snows. The description in here is ...

Thank you yet again for another review. It is nice to know someone is following my story. Thanks for the advice, I have applied it and it looks much better.