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felistia

The Seven Tribes of Megalonia

  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Dental Awareness

    That is a first-rate poem. The writing is outstanding and the ending is hilarious. It just proves that you should be scared when you go to the dentist.

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: A Haiku and Tanka

    It is very descriptive and reading it makes me fell relaxed. The first part seems a bit short so I couldn't get into it, but the second part was excellent. ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Monday night

    I like the description, it gives you the full picture. It almost feels like I'm there and that is what a good description is supposed to do. I wish there ...

    Oct 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Watchman

    I really like your work. It has a nice rhythm to it and I like the concept. I can relate to it since I follow a similar religion. Keep up ...

    Oct 23, 2015


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott