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The prologue was amazing! You have a great writing style, and the end was really suspenseful. Keep writing, this was really good! :D

Aloha, Deoris! I've heard of Marion Zimmer Bradley, but I haven't read any of her books. Sadly. :( Enjoy being on YWS! :D

It's really nice! Please continue more of it soon.

His mother was sat at the breakfast bar, hidden behind the newspaper. His mother sat.../His mother was sitting Once his was free of toast, he gave his mother a puzzled ...

Thank you, Nate! Honestly, with all the temptation and spoilers going around, I'll just have to avoid the Internet till I read the whole HP 7 book!! Which...I will be ...

It was well-written, but a little boring. Nothing fantasy happens in this part. I take it the fantasy element will come in the next part?

I've posted the prologue of 'Icy Paths' on the Fantasy Fiction board. Here's the first chapter. It's almost finished, I guess. Note - this is the unpolished version. Any crit ...

I don't like torturing my characters. I only do it for the conflict.

I like paperback. Ebooks make my eyes hurt. Hardbacks are...um..hard. Why is there always a Pat Buchanon option on the polls??

I haven't watched it yet, but my enthusiasm is being reading some of these posts. Just joking, :D. It's coming out in cinemas on July 19th here. (Only two days ...

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Wow, I liked this chapter very much, especially the description. I'm guessing the raven-haired woman wasn't the main character? Very interesting chapter! Please continue it.

Watership Down by Richard Adams. I really, really like that book, and my favorite rabbit is Fiver. :D

Yes to all your questions except the last two. First chapter is finished, but I want to change it, it's wayyyy too...yuck.

Thanks! :D Jerita - No, Snow White doesn't have anything to do with the story. Thanks for the critique! I'll fix all that. Magicman - That's very encouraging, thank you!