forever.always

This was so good. To be honest, when I first saw the title, I thought that it would be a boring, slow-moving biography about Michael Jackson's life. But this, however, ...

I was taking a walk the other day, and this brief vignette is basically just what I noticed about my environment. I didn't want it to have much structure (or ...

I thought this was very interesting! :D I like the idea behind the plot. However, I do have a few comments: I thought the beginning portion was much too short ...

Hi there! :D I know you didn't say that you reviewed "other fiction", but I was wondering... Do you mind reviewing my writing piece "She Doesn't Know"? There's the link! ...

Something’s there. I know it. I can sense it, feel it coming closer. Step by step, it’s drawing nearer; something, hiding. The room is dark, closed, compact. My hands are ...

Hi there wearabright! Haha, yes, I did notice how you added spaces to fill up the box. Don't worry about it, it's all good. ;) Anyways, welcome!! I'm new here ...

Hey Cassidy! Welcome to YWS! I'm quite new as well, so I have some advice: Click around the website, read the forums, look at the will help you a lot. ...

Welcome to YWS Jay! :D I'm pretty new here myself, I only joined a couple of days ago, so I'm still getting used to the site. It may look a ...

This is excellent. I've read some of your other pieces, and I must say...you are very good! One comment though: the note. I was kind of confused when I began ...

I like this idea. It's different, it's unique, and overall, I think it's genius. I absolutely love how you began your introduction: "I’m not an evil witch, if that’s what ...

Haha yeah, you can just call me "Forever". :D

Great! Thanks for your help! =)

Hi, my username is forever.always, and I am new to YWS. I first discovered this website from a friend, and I eagerly registered for an account a few days ago. ...

I think it's really good, I like how short it is and how it doesn't really delve deeper into the relationship of the two characters. It leaves us waiting for ...

It's kind of just a vignette, sort of. thanks for your advice! :D