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Hey there Shina! :) Forever here, I'll be reviewing your short story today. Sometimes I wonder what it would be like if the world were to fall, if the walls ...

Hey there fellow teammate! :D Forever here, I'll be your reviewer for today. There was someone in the wardrobe. (Excellent. As you already know, the beginning of the story should ...

Hey there Fellow Teammate! It's Forever, and I will be your reviewer for today. :D First off, I'd like to say good luck! Since we're on the same team and ...

Hi! I’m Forever, and I’ll be reviewing your poem this afternoon. You’ve caught me, red-h aned, Committing my crime. (I like this. I think it is a very good hook. ...

This is great, really. I love how you wrote it with real simplicity. I love that type of writing. =) I think you meant "union street" to be the name ...

This was so good. To be honest, when I first saw the title, I thought that it would be a boring, slow-moving biography about Michael Jackson's life. But this, however, ...

I thought this was very interesting! :D I like the idea behind the plot. However, I do have a few comments: I thought the beginning portion was much too short ...

This is excellent. I've read some of your other pieces, and I must say...you are very good! One comment though: the note. I was kind of confused when I began ...

I like this idea. It's different, it's unique, and overall, I think it's genius. I absolutely love how you began your introduction: "I’m not an evil witch, if that’s what ...

I like the plot of your story, it's very nice. I think the characters of your story are well described as well. I have a few comments: “That makes absolutely ...

Great job! I have a few comments: You know that feeling that sometimes you have when you receive bad news. (Try adding a question mark at the end of this ...

I really like this. The part about the "sculpted" hands was well described, I liked it. However, I agree with MiriamHannah; I thought the end could be altered slightly. [/quote]Strap ...

I thought the title of this poem was really creative! great job. Overall, I thought this was a very nice piece. =) However, I thought there could be a few ...

This is very nice! I liked your choice of words and adjectives; I could definitely imagine the scenery. I think your last stanza is especially significant. It was powerful! :D