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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Little Macey

    Oops! Sorry about that. My little picture of an ice cream didn't show up. :(

    Jul 29, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Wolf Girl

    Hey there Fellow Teammate! It's Forever, and I will be your reviewer for today. :D First off, I'd like to say good luck! Since we're on the same team and ...

    Jul 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Blackout

    I think it's really good, I like how short it is and how it doesn't really delve deeper into the relationship of the two characters. It leaves us waiting for ...

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rush Hour

    It's kind of just a vignette, sort of. thanks for your advice! :D

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: War (I wrote this in fifth grade)

    For a fifth-grader this is pretty awesome if you ask me! =)

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In the Margins

    Wow, this is amazing. The way you began your story was absolutely astounding. I was totally not prepared for it. =) This is really good.

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: She Doesn't Know

    I know that I started a lot of sentences with "I" but I did it on purpose.

    Jul 10, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Another teen pregnancy story:)

    whoa, some people are so intensely thorough in reviewing! haha, that's cool anyways, looooooooove the story yaayyy! I gave it a gold star ahaha!

    Jul 10, 2009


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