freudianlisp

Wow. Seriously. This is the only story I've read that I actually don't have anything to nitpick about. Even though it's a short story, it makes a clear point throughout ...

Wow, you've tackled a difficult idea here. :O I like what you did with it. The beginning paragraph appealed to me, so kudos to you, because it's often the hardest ...

Hello, Jane! For starters, I really enjoyed reading this piece. The concept was fascinating and I was kind of hoping that you would continue this but the shortness of it ...