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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Kiss me when I'm sober

    Wow this poem is excellent. I would only make a few changes. The third stanza doesn't seem to flow though. Your use of literary devices are pretty good and your ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Soul To Take

    Oh my goodness. This poem is excellent you are an amazing writer! This poem is very similar to something that happened to me last year, and I got around it ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Kiss Of Death: Chapter One

    This is extremely good! I love your wording and how you kept the reader in suspense. Your imagination is absolutely amazing. Creativity is key in this story and I love ...

    Oct 25, 2010


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint