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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Thought I'd try again

    i loved the ending "Or was I destined for hell?" good job! *gives a thumbs up*

    Mar 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Reflection of the Sky

    it's very nice, but the last few lines seem a little out of place as if you had an idea but lost it along the way.

    Mar 21, 2008


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)