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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Cosmos

    Hi, Happy last review day in 2016! This poem is an interesting poem. I am a crazy stargazer myself that had looked up to the sky for more than 1 ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Love You, Grandpa

    Hi, This poem is just so sad, cute and raw. Seriously, I can feel you. ** The words or rather your diction here is quite simpler and yet, so nice. ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Forgetting you if I can

    Hi! I've been trying to review this for a while, but it seemed I only waited the review day to review this, so sorry for not reviewing earlier. (Well, whatever, ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Breathe in and breathe out

    Hi, It's an interesting topic for a poem and I can't say I don't dislike it, but I surely like this unique attempt for a poem. ** Like Lumi said ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Forgive

    Hi, Just a reminder note that I don't read the previous reviews because I'm too tired to do that, so sorry if I repeat something. However, if I did repeat ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the world, unreasonably quiet.

    Hi, I love the way the title resonates with the points in the poem AKA the title is suitable for the poem. *** I got nothing much no comments, really, ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ocean

    Hi, This is a good poem, but not as romantic as I expected it to be since you told us that this will be a romance poem. Anyway good try ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning

    Hi, This poem is well, perfectly normal. It has a clear message and I got no much trouble understanding this. Well, I don't really like using second point of view ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: misstep

    Hi, I will try to review this in harmless way possible. !!!*!!! Your poem is a fast read for me. I understand each points straight ahead although I don't know ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Hiding in a Corner

    Hi, Good poem. I hardly see any error or mistake. This poem has this aura of something like depression or social anxiety disorder or like anything mental related. The interesting ...

    Dec 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Snow ramblings

    Hi, Remembrance or Forgotten Memories or whatever names you've gotten yourself. And I just remembered this little song from Piano Tile 2 when reading your poem. :'( I don't know ...

    Dec 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Drowning

    Hi, A nice poem. Lovely; sad: Two words that really describe this poem. So, I was thinking of this piano piece when I was reading this poem. It was just, ...

    Dec 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Place I Know You

    Hi, First of all, I gotta share this song with you. The song's in my playlist and when I clicked on this, this song's playing and I found that really ...

    Dec 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Freedom

    Hi, Sure, freedom is beautiful; your poem is clarifying that up. This review is to fulfill the long-but-not-lost request you gave to me. Okay, like usual, you are using beautiful ...

    Sep 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Reminiscing~

    Hi, I get it, but this poem is really confusing me a lot like why you wrote that when you weren't going to explain on that thing. Or why you ...

    Sep 15, 2016


Stories don't end because you stopped paying attention.
— SJ Whitby