futrauthr482

Okay. So, first of all, it's decent. As I read through it, I noticed there are details that are unnecessary. As writers we must find what specifically needs to be ...

The scene definitely has potential, but I feel there is emotion missing. Especially with this point of view you can afford to tell us exactly how we're feeling, as an ...

Okay, you have a nice idea for your story. My one wish would be for there to be more emotion in this piece. It has the potential to be an ...

I completely and totally applaud you, because I normally don't like romance, but I was actually cheering for this guy. I liked how it was so obvious to see how ...

Overall, I enjoyed your story. I liked how in the very beginning Emi was scared to share her poetry. That gave her a lt of character which is really important ...