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I really like it! Everything was great, i didn't see any grammar errors or anything at all. Great job in starting a story, I'm definitely excited to read the next ...

WOW, it's like you're inside of my head! I can so relate and i think a lot of people will, which is really important when you're writing. I loved the ...

That brought me pretty close to tears, it was really touching and i can completely relate. Even now, it feels like his ghost is haunting me, and eventhough part of ...

It was really simple but I loved it!! I liked how you used the short phrases and bits throughout the entire thing; that's how i think most of the time ...

No way this is your worst poem, i can't imagine how good you're other stuff is. Honestly i really liked it. It was really fascinating. A little confusing at first ...

That was sooooo good. I can relate; last year i had writer's block for over four months and i thought i was going to die from all my pent up ...

The world looks at a silver coating draped over the truth that is existence and what we aim for throughout never letting truth see the sun. Superficial glances as if ...

This was REALLY nose was literally an inch from the screen, the poem drew me in because I can definitely relate. I'm not usually one for couplets but this flowed ...

I really liked this poem!!! It was definitely something i'll remember. Sometimes i feel the same way, almost as if i'm living inside another persons body and the title that ...

It was really creepy but in a good way and it's a piece that makes you think, always something i like. You've got a really distinct voice. I'm looking forward ...

It was good but i would want to see more emotion in it. You kept repeating "I am here" and it was alright because it gave off a sense of ...

I really liked it...scratch that, i loved it! I didn't see that many gramatical errors or anything. Everyone's got that little devil sitting on there shoulder, i could really imagine ...

My heart was pounding and my panting breath fogged the glasses propped on my nose as I ran for my life through my own home. A cramp grew in my ...

Wow, this was a really good poem. It deals with a conflict that i think a lot of kids feel with their parents. It's kind of a love hate relationship. ...

I won't lie, i was laughing throughout this entire poem. It's really refreshing to read a poem like this, where it's not all superdramatic. I really liked how lighthearted it ...